Feed Back

Just finished up with my meeting/pitch to the three professionals at the bank. Overall feed back was very positive! They all agreed that they like how the design was very clear and concise. One person commented on how the logo may not really say what the project is by just looking at it, in which case maybe it needs some sort of tagline. Which is funny because I had a tagline that I removed because in some cases it appeared to small. I think the solution will be to use it but only when necessary. They also commented on how they feel like Vancouver or Nanaimo could really use a program like this, which was encouraging. It was pointed out that I need to make sure that it stays easy for individuals to get rid of their items so that they don't feel like it's of extra inconvenience to them. In the end I also got some extra feedback on presenting, they said I did okay but they could tell I was nervous in the beginning.

Reworked lockers with a smaller screen

Revised Website Progress

Feedback/App Rework

The feedback I received from the young professionals was extremely helpful in allowing me to narrow my focus. During the feedback I was quite concerned about what i was going to do, but once I reworked my rationale the pieces started to fit together. Overall I'm much happier with the direction my project is headed in. The people providing feedback gave some really good advice on things I had never really thought about but make complete sense, such as telling a story through the photographs I was using, as the stories put a personal face to the design. Someone else mentioned that with the lockers I need to make it more clear as to what they are, so that someone walking up to them for the first time knows what they are for. I also had a few suggestions from Rob Dodds on how to tweak the project to make it work, but it swayed to much from my initial concept. Here is where Im at so far with the new app.

Some more feedback

Got some more feedback today, so far it was the most helpful. I think it's because Jesse does graphic design and the other feedback has been from people who aren't designers. Both are valuable because of the different perspectives, but Jesses was more practical and constructive. Speaking with him defiantly made me question a few things and gave me more inspiration. he didn't have a chance to fill out my questionnaire but said he would get it to my by Friday.  

Classifieds page thumbs/roughs

This page has been driving me crazy, Ive been stuck on it for weeks and still not happy with it. Hopefully I'll get some good fees back this Friday.

Some Interaction and Feedback